Power: it's something that everybody longs to have in this world, but not all people can claim. As everyone tries to gain their own share of power, they forget about the more important aspects of life, and eventually the focal point of their life is the concept of gaining power. Not only are they ruining themselves and their morals, but they are also negatively effecting others around them. What happens when the world becomes so absorbed with greedy individuals that the generations yet to come won't experience the comfort of true love surrounding them? Families will become separated. Friends will become enemies. Countries will become rivals. The world will become scandalous.. unless there is change. We all know that the people of the world
should change, but whether or not the change will take place, nobody knows. When the power of love becomes greater than the love of power, the world will know peace.
When i was reading this I did not know what to comment on really I am not at all good with commenting on blogs but what I liked about this piece was really everything there was not one thing that I found that would not make someone think that this person is a great writer.
ReplyDeleteI agree with this so much i think that our gernation should take it back to the 70's where everybody loved everybody ... and i loved this you are a good writer ...
ReplyDeleteThis is seriously so good and intriguing! I agree with this x183640. You used REALLY nice word choice to push your ideas out. I also liked how the length of this piece didn't take from the content. Overall, nice job!
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